Jan. 12, 2023

Orphaned Signal

Show Notes

Description

Time travel out of the realm of Babel; introducing the knights of Time: the phaots and the chaots. Madam Veer, the lyan and the wrat have interactions with Bast, Sekhmet and others, in the style of artistic fiction.

Website: https://orphanedsignal.com/

What I Liked About This Episode

I give you credit for pressing record when many people never do.

What I Thought Could Use Some Polishing

Your description used a lot of "insider terms" that I may understand after I listen to the show, but as someone who had not, I found it confusing.

Your audio quality has MAJOR volume issues.

You have a lot of background noise where I hear papers rustling, lots of breathing.

I had no idea what you were talking about until you explained that these people were Gods. Maybe add some narration so people can understand what we are walking into.

I was confused for the episode.

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